"Hey Joseph, I put in drums, so it sounds like there is direction in the song. It's simple, because it looks like the song has a lot more developing to do. But honestly, I'm having troubling visualizing the song completely.
What I feel we…"
"Added chorus 2 with a stab at a repeating piano bass line.
A couple notes-
-In places where the lyrics matches something from one of Sara's songs (such as ka-lei-do-scope and Her-cu-les) I matched the rhythm and pitch to the sheet music for…"
"Yeah, I'll meditate on the idea of throwing in something simple for a bass line. When I write up the vocal part for the Chorus 2 I'll to work in a repeating bass pattern of some kind instead of the inconsistent cords and stray notes…"
"Wow, I gotta say I'm really impressed with the artistry and work put in on of all of these gifts. Also, it seems like everyone did something different. I'm totally in on this gift exchange next year."
"Added verse 3 to noteflight composition; did a little more experimenting with cords and rhythm. Work your magic with the drum parts when you get a chance Eric. I figure we'll work through the whole song this way and then see what we…"