"I put in some stuff and added the first two lines, though I suppose the rhythm dissuaded you from doing it originally. I can see why you decided like that, as it was tricky to collect. What I ended up doing was kinda cheating, but it's not…"
"I agree about the need for piano, but I'm hesitant to add more because I'm not as familiar as I want myself to be. I could add some ditty if you want, but just some ditty is all it's going to be...
I don't know if the charting…"
"Wow, sounds great. Probably about 80% of the way there to being a complete song that's not bad to listen to. Great idea to switch the vocals to trombone and the drums and bass blend really well with the melody. One point…"
"So I updated all the parts I haven't touched yet for "Never Final." I need feedback on that, ideas and whatnot. Also, there is not a whole lot of piano in the song, mostly because I don't have a good knowledge base about piano…"
"So I got around to creating a separate and SBF-dedicated NF account, "Sareilles". The pass is "54r4". I don't know if this will ever be relevant, but I've also created, in the process, a separate gmail address:…"
"Thanks, Joseph. I changed the main piano part to trombone to really be able to differentiate between vocal and instrument, and think it sounds better. But then I started to change around other stuff for the first verse, which I thought pleased my…"
"Ok, finally got up to putting the rest of the draft up on Musescore and made a separate document to work on the melody separately. There's a few hairy parts still in the melody, mostly in the 2nd and 3rd verses so next time I put in work…"
"The way I interpreted the line, Sara is referring to death, which will (very most likely) happen to each and every one of us. The inevitable fatalism of her view, and what should be pessimism, is shaped to be an incentive, an optimism, instead. So…"